Writing task 2: HOW TO SUPPORT IDEAS IN THE BODY

HOW TO SUPPORT IDEAS IN THE BODY

1.      Give an example:

Use these expression: take .... as an example/examples. For instance, for example.

Model:

      Computers prove to play a vital/ an important role in our life today/ these days/ nowadays. Take workplace as an example. Thanks to this technology, employees’ work is much easier and more efficient. To make it clear <.......>

      Solutions/ Policies must be proposed/ give/ released to deal with over-population. Take China as an example. This country has implemented on child policy for many years.

      The first advantage of eating fresh fruits is that they are very beneficial for our health. For example, oranges provide us with plenty of vitamin C, which strengthen our immune system in fighting against diseases.

2.      Chronological or time order: Past vs Present

Topic sentence + past ( 2 sentences ) + present ( 2 sentences )

Ex: In the past, people communicated by hand writing letters which were significantly slow, time consuming and insecure. However, these days, electrical email is fast and cheap.

3.      If or if not

Working part time is very beneficial for students. This is especially true if students choose to work/  do a job related to their major. Thanks to this, they can not only earn money to cover daily expenses but also gain/get valuable job experience which is practically useful for their future work/ which opens more doors for students in finding a good job in their future.

4.      Explain:

Learning abroad is a great way to improve our foreign language. This is because/ By this I mean/ To make it clearer/ In order words....