Hiển thị các bài đăng có nhãn IELTS Writing Task 2. Hiển thị tất cả bài đăng
Hiển thị các bài đăng có nhãn IELTS Writing Task 2. Hiển thị tất cả bài đăng

Thứ Sáu, 8 tháng 8, 2014

Writing task 2: Type 3 - AGREE OR DISAGREE

AGREE OR DISAGREE
Outline
I.                  Introduction
-          General topic sentence 1
-          General topic sentence 2
-          In my opinion ( đối với loại đề tài Agree/ Disagree cần khẳng định opinion ngay ở phần mở đầu)
II.               Body
-          Point of view 1: give reason to support the idea that you agree
To begin with............ This is mainly because..................Those are the reasons why (reconfirm the agreed point)....
-          Point of view 2: give reason to support the idea that you agree
In addition to this...........To be more detailed...................For this reason, (reassure the agreed point)........
-          Point of view 3 (optional): viết dưới dạng tranh luận ngược, đưa ra lý do để minh họa cho ý kiến không đồng ý.
Some people are of their opinions that........................However, the reality has shown that
III.           Conclusion
-          Confirm the agreed idea again.
To put it in a nutshell.......................


Topic: Money spent on space exploration should be better than spent on other problems/ issues       on the earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Synonyms:
-          Money= budget= fund= a large sum/ amount of money
-          Spent on st = pay for st= invest in st= allocate to st
-          Space= universe= outer space
-          Explore= discover= study= research
-          Problems can include famine, poverty, pollution, health…
INTRODUCTION
General topic 1 (space): In recent years/ decades several countries have invested a lot of money in space study. General topic 2 (earth): In the meantime, human beings in the planet have to face/ encounter some serious problems. My opinion: From my point of view, such budget should be better used for earth problems.
BODY
Point of view 1: To begin with, more funds should be invested in solving/ dealing with poverty. This is mainly because thousands of poor children in many parts of the world especially in Africa die yearly due to the lack of food and millions of others are in need of basic living things. This is the reason why we need/ ought to/ had better offer financial support in order to improve/ enhance their quality of life/ life conditions.
Point of view 2: In addition to this, medical also needs more investment. To make it clearer/ To be more detailed there are many fatal/ incurable diseases these days such as AIDS or cancer and so on. Studies have shown that the number of victims is increasing at an alarming rate. For this reason/ This is the reason why more money needs to be allocated in order to/ so as to find out treatments/ remedies for saving people.
CONCLUSION
Confirm your own ideas again (in another way): To put it in a nutshell, although it is believed that outer space investment can give us more resources and living space in the future, it is only the hope until now. In the meantime, money ought to be better to put in the real/ practical difficulties human beings face every day.
Some people suggest that class attendance should be optional instead of compulsory. Do you agree or disagree with this idea?
HOW TO WRITE A COUNTER-AGREEMENT
  1. Other people’s opinion?
  2. Refuse this opinion and prove it is unreasonable
Some people may claim that/ are of their opinion that… Unluckily/ However/ in reality, / however the reality has shown that…
Some people may claim that exploring space will sooner or later helps us to find another livable planet. However / Unluckily, billions of dollars have been wasted on space discovery without any realistic result so far. It is sensible to divert that big sum of money to helping the needy people as well as protecting the earth.

Some people may claim that class attendance should be optional. This is because it can allow students to have free time to do part time job in order to not only gain experience but also cover the daily expense/ living conditions. However/Neverthless, reality has shown that students who often skip classes have poor academic performance. More seriously, they are usually kicked out of school early.

Thứ Hai, 28 tháng 7, 2014

Writing task 2: Essay collections

Topic: Dieting to lose weight has become increasingly prevalent in the developed world. Why do you think people nowadays are so concerned with body shape and size?
Nowadays, it has become fashionable to be slim and fit, especially in developed countries. In my point of view, the growing concern with body shape and size is generally formed by the media, the fashion industry and modern notions of health and fitness.
            Firstly, people seem to associate slimness with positive traits.  It has been demonstrated that people who are overweight are more likely to suffer from health problems such as heart diseases and diabetes, whereas those who do not eat too much are seen as having good self-control and considered healthier.
            Secondly, advertisements appear to encourage people to value slim figures. They often show desirable consumer products alongside slim models. Obviously, advertisers would not use slim models unless the public already had a favorable view of them.
            Moreover, many elements of society promote the idea that having a perfect body is a guaranteed way to others’ admiration and approval. Societies may portray this perfect body as the key to attract a romantic partner, to land a dream job, to have a good health as well as success and self-confidence. Furthermore, it seems that the perfect body might be the passport to a good life. However, the majority of media photos which portray human with perfect bodies are enhanced by modern technology to achieve the effect. It is both unfair and unrealistic to expect everyone to look like these so-called perfect bodies, but the power of such images remains hard to resist.
            In conclusion, we should take consideration into what stereotypes of the perfect body may affect us. And above all, we should accept ourselves for who we are, not for what these measurements might be.
Words count: 276

Topic: The problem of obesity is mainly due to people’s lack of knowledge about healthy eating. To what extent do you agree with the statement above?
Nowadays, there is a growing concern about the prevalence of obesity in societies. Many people would blame that it is the consequence of lacking necessary information about healthy eating. In my opinion, this notion deserves good attention. However, there are other factors that might be worth considering as well.
            It seems that many people do not have sufficient knowledge and awareness about good nutrition or a balanced diet. Some people may even underestimate the amount of calories in food. Therefore, they cannot lose weight even if they know what is in their food and how much they should eat.
            Besides, obesity may be due to genetic factors. A child who has overweight parents might be overweight too. However, if the family adopts healthy food and active habits, the child’s chance of being overweight or obese can be reduced.
            Lack of physical activities may be another major cause that leads to obesity. In big cities, people tend to find work primarily as office staff. They leave behind physical labor and adopt sedentary jobs. Also, the development of modern technology has made people rely heavily on cars and labor saving machines. This leads to low level of physical activities and creates an inactive lifestyle. People who are inactive are more likely to gain weight because they do not burn the calories that they take in from food and drinks.
            In conclusion, not only lacking of knowledge about healthy eating but also genetic factors as well as insufficient physical activities can increase a person’s risk of gaining weight and obesity.


Topic: What can governments do to encourage children to eat a healthier diet?
Children’s health is of primary importance to a country; however, nowadays their health is increasingly deteriorating due to bad eating habits. Therefore, it is likely that governments should take this issue as a matter of urgency and take necessary steps to raise awareness as well as encourage children to eat a healthy diet.
            Firstly, governments may regulate the food industry. This can be taken by requiring food producers to fortify their products with vitamins; as a result, children would eat healthier food without having to change their habits. However, this would be unpopular and expensive for food producers.
            Secondly, due to the fact that school meals can account for the majority of the food children eat during the week, regulating school meals can be considered as another solution. School should be asked to provide only healthy food and drink at lunch time. The obvious benefit from this approach is that children would have at least one healthy meal per day. Nevertheless, there is no guarantee that children would cease to bring unhealthy packed lunches or go out for lunch to fast food outlets.
            One more feasible solution is to educate children thoroughly about healthy eating. This could be implemented by requiring schools to teach children to cook healthy foods. As a result, children can take pride in their learning and transfer these skills to their home. But the biggest disadvantage of this method is that schools may not have the facilities to teach cooking.
            In conclusion, the responsibility for incentivizing children to eat a healthier diet not only falls to the governments but also needs the involvement of all parents, families and schools.

Topic: Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Partly disagree:
These days, there is a growing tendency that convenience foods are well on their way to become the dominant foods instead traditional one in human’s daily meals. In my opinion, I agree that convenience foods may continue to outweigh ordinary ones, but I believe people would never take them as permanent substitutes.
            It seems to be undeniable that nowadays, the popularity and favorite of convenience foods is remarkable, especially in hectic societies. Many people do not have enough time to cook; therefore convenience foods present an attractive option. People can consume convenience foods nearly on a daily basis, from breakfasts at home, lunches at workplace to schools’ meals. Almost everyone is fancy of processed foods because of their diversification, time-saving and ease of consumption factors.
            However, traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation still play a vital role in human’s life. Take family’s ordinary meal as an example. This is when parents and children prepare foods, cook together as well as spend time talking to each other in the kitchen, which can be taken as a unifying element in family life. Gathering around a family table for a home-cooked dinner is a precious moment that no convenience meal can offer. Besides, preparing and cooking foods can also help people control over the nutritional content and the overall healthfulness of the foods they eat. 
In conclusion, even though convenience foods maybe more suitable and popular in modern societies, the traditional cuisines would never be substituted.


 
Topic: Success in formal ‘pen and paper’ examinations is often seen to be a sign of intelligence.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the view that formal examinations measure intelligence?
Synonym: 
Assessment = evaluation = appraisal (n: đánh giá hoặc xác định phẩm chất tốt)
Take test in normal way = handwritten test

No one can deny the fact that paper tests have been proved to be an indispensable part of knowledge evaluation. It is believed that students achieving god results from these tests are considered clever. In my opinion, the traditional form of examinations would continue to be used as an intelligence measurement.
Needless to say, formal tests have been rated as an effective tool to evaluate students’ knowledge due to its plentiful forms of inquiry. For instance, a well-designed test paper including a range of tasks, such as multiple choices, true or false questions or writing questions can thoroughly examine students’ learning ability and their master of knowledge from different perspectives. However, sometimes students may cram for the exam or learn by rote, which could make pen and paper tests fail to fully measure the comprehensive academic ability of students.
Another undeniable reason why paper tests can measure learners’ true knowledge achievement is that they could have the opportunity to share their own views to specific problems. Take essay as an example. When students are given an essay topic at an examination, they are encouraged to freely write about anything based on what they have learnt. As a result of this, there would occasionally be some possibility to get genius ideas from those results. The minus point of taking exam in normal way is that it might trigger anxiety in students so that they cannot show their real capacity.
          In conclusion, I believe that formal paper and pen exams can provide trustful assessments on students’ intelligence. Therefore, they would persist continuously as a vital method of evaluation in education system.



Topic: In order to be truly employable, the educated person should be able to demonstrate not just knowledge but also the ability to work independently in teams
How can teamwork best be encouraged and assessed in educational settings?

1.      Synonym:
-          Ability = competence ( competence in teamwork)
-          Educated person = qualified person
-          Demonstrate = present = show = demo
-          Assess = appraise = determine = estimate = judge = evaluate
-          Encourage = inspire = strengthen = fortify
-          Educational settings = institutions

2.      Outline:
Introduction:
It is a fact that competence in teamwork is not only necessary but also an enormous advantage for students who are about to enter the jobs market. Therefore, training students in teamwork plays a vital role in every educational setting. This essay will examine the common methods used to fortify and appraise teamwork skill among students.
Body paragraph 1: Bottom of Form

Solution 1: require students to work on group projects outside of school.
Specific action: assign group research project investigating aspect of local history
Positive consequences: motivating for students; students would learn to work as a team independently.
Drawback: difficult to assess individual student’s contribution to team effort.
Firstly, students should be required to work on group projects outside school. Specifically, schools can assign group research project investigating aspect of local history. With this approach, it would create motivation for students as well as teach them how to work as a team independently. However, there would be difficult for teacher to evaluate precisely individual student’s contribution to team.
Body paragraph 2: Bottom of Form

Solution 2: group project could be done partly in school, partly outside of school.
Specific action: ask students to periodically present ‘work in progress’ in class
Positive consequences: teacher could monitor students’ work more easily.
Drawback: time-consuming for large classes.
Secondly, group project could be done partly in school, partly outside of school. In order to closely determine students’ performance, teacher can ask them to periodically present ‘work in progress’ in the class. Hence, students’ work would be monitored more easily. Though, this method might be unfeasible in case of large classes due to its time-consuming factor.
Body paragraph 3: Bottom of Form

Solution 3: in addition to some teacher monitoring, students assess own progress.
Specific action: ask students write a learning journal throughout the project
Positive consequences: burden of monitoring and assessing progress shared by teachers and students.
In addition to some teacher monitoring, students could also self-evaluate their own progress. For instance, teachers can require students to write a learning journal throughout the project. Thanks to this, the burden of monitoring and assessing progress can be shared by both teacher and students.
Conclusion:
In conclusion, there are variety methods that can be used at educational settings in order to reinforce and assess teamwork skill. However, pros and cons of each approach should be carefully considered so that it can be done in the right way.

      It is a fact that competence in teamwork is not only necessary but also an enormous advantage for students who are about to enter the jobs market. Therefore, training students in team work plays a vital role in every educational setting. This essay will examine some practical methods that can be applied at schools to fortify and appraise students’ ability of working in a team.
       Firstly, students should be required to work on group projects outside the school. Specifically, schools can assign a group research project investigating different aspects of local history. With this approach, it would create motivation for students as well as teach them how to work as a team independently. However, precise assessment on individual student’s contribution to team might be a difficult task for the teacher.
       Besides, group project could be done partly inside and partly outside of the school. In order to closely determine students’ performance, the teacher can ask them to periodically present ‘ work in progress’ in the class. Hence, students’ work would be monitored more easily. Though, this method might be unfeasible in case of large classes due to its time-consuming factor.
    In addition to some teaching monitoring, students could also self-evaluate their own progress. For instance, teachers can require students to write a learning journal throughout the project. This can bring benefit for both teachers and students since the burden of monitoring and assessing progress has been shared respectively.

      In conclusion, there are various methods that can be used in educational settings in order to reinforce and appraise teamwork skill. However, pros and cons of each approach should be carefully considered so that it can be done in the right way.

Common mistakes in Writing

Các lỗi thường gặp trong Writting – Common mistakes in Writing.
-                     Quy tắc sử dụng Article trong essay:
1.      (a)/(an) + singular noun = one
2.      The + Noun -> 2nd
3.      Không sử dụng the, a, an trước danh từ số nhiều hoặc danh từ không đếm được mang ý nghĩa chung chung ( Don’t use the, a, an before plural Noun or Uncountable Noun in general sense)
4.      The + Noun + of: làm cho danh từ trở nên xác định
Ví dụ: The production of chocolate
            The percentage of male and female
            The development of science and technology
5.      The + Noun + relative pronoun (who, which....): làm danh từ trở nên xác định
Ví dụ: The man who is standing over there is my close friend
6.      Tuyệt đối danh từ đếm được phải ở một trong 3 trạng thái: có a/an chưa, có (the) chưa, có ở dạng số nhiều chưa.

-                     Quy tắc sử dụng dấu chấm câu
1.      Dấu phẩy sử dung để tách hai mệnh đề nếu sử dụng các linking words như: so, besides, therefore, moreover, however....
2.      Beside (preposition) = next to. Besides = in addition
3.      Among + Plural Noun (sau among không có dạng đi với danh từ không đếm được. Ví dụ: She is among my favorite singers
4.      Sử dụng cặp dấu phẩy ( , ) cho các linking đóng vai trò như (adv)
Ví dụ:
......., in fact, ............ ( in fact lúc này vai trò là adv)
......., however, .......... hoặc ........ However, ..........
5.      Các sử dụng đặc biệt của “which” – có thể làm đại diện cho cả mệnh đề đứng trước, chứ không phải chỉ cho 1 danh từ nhất định được nhắc đến trước

Ví dụ: Tom pushed Nick into the swimming pool, which seemed to amuse everyone.

Writing task 2: Type 2 - ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES

ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES

Topic 1: What are the good points and bad points of using the Internet today?
Topic 2: What are the pros and cons of living apart from parents?

INTRODUCTION

1.      Identify General topic ( xác định chủ đề):
– The first sentence (Should use long sentence or complex sentence): Câu đầu tiên trong phần mở đề nói về chủ đề chung đang được đề cập đến.

Ex:
-          There is no denying that / No one can deny that traffic problems are a constant headache in many countries all over the world these days.
No one can deny the fact that: không ai có thể phủ nhận 1 sự thật là

2.      Advantages – disadvantages cite (paraphrase or use synonym: Trích dẫn lại đề bài bằng cách dùng các từ đồng nghĩa hoặc thay đổi cấu trúc câu.
Advantages
Disadvantages
Positive aspect
Negative aspect
Merits
Problems
Pros
Cons
Benefits
Drawbacks
Good points
Bad points
Plus
Minus

Ex:
Ø  General topic = fact: It can be said that / No one can deny the fact that the Internet these days proves itself to be an indispensable part of our lives. ( đề cập đến General topic là the Internet )
Ø  Advantages – disadvantages: Although it brings us big / huge / enormous benefits, there still exist some serious drawbacks which should be considered / which we have to consider.( trích dẫn lại đề )
Ø  Thesis statement: This essay will present/examine the pros and cons of the use of Internet nowadays.
A complete Introduction:
No one can deny the fact that the Internet these days proves itself to be an indispensable part of our lives. Although it brings us enormous benefits, there still exist some serious drawbacks which are worth intensive consideration.

BODY

Ø  Advantages ( 1, 2) + Disadvantages (1, 2) or
Ø  Advantages (1, 2) + Disadvantages (1): if you are more in favor of advantages and vice versa.
ADV1: The first and most important benefit is that it is a great way to communicate/ we can use it to keep in touch with other people < explain, analyze, give example... >
            The first and most important benefit is that it is a great way to communicate. Take email as an example. In the past, hand writing letters were the prominent way people used to keep in touch with each other. However, delivering them could take several days or even weeks due to distance. In addition, senders could run the risk of the post office losing or damaging their items. Nowadays, thanks to the Internet, electrical email has been used, which brings enormous convenience for users. Specifically, emails can be composed, sent and received within a matter of minutes. Also, transmitting emails is free, other than the cost of the Internet connection.
            ADV2: Another merit, no less important is that we can use it to broaden our horizons. This is because the Internet has brought a great deal of information on every field, from history, economy to science or religion.
DIS1:
            One the other hand, Internet users have to face some problems. First of all, some adolescents’ behaviors seem to be dictated in a bad way due to the frequent exposure to violent or illegal websites. This is because Internet can be accessed easily and there are no specific restriction policies in order to prevent those websites that have bad influence on young people.
            Secondly, the use of Internet may make out personal information vulnerable to theft. For instance, when we use Internet services such as e-shopping, e-banking or social networking, our account numbers, addresses, photos and credit card numbers can be stolen or misused by thieving websites and individuals.
Sample Body:

CONCLUSION

In conclusion / After all things considered / To put it in a nutshell.
-          Restate – advantage + disadvantages: (nói lại vấn đề đã đề cập đến)
-          Recommendation or advice
In conclusion, there is a saying that all the coins have 2 sides / everything has 2 sides / everything comes at a price and using the Internet today is not an exception.

Weigh: Nonetheless, the greater magnitude of its advantages outweighs its disadvantages.
Advice: It is advised that raising the Internet users’ awareness or policies issued / produced by the government to control the drawbacks can give a hand to improve the Internet matters.


Writing Taks 2: Type 1 - DISCUSSION BOTH VIEWS

Topic 1: To solve the traffic problems, some people believe that punishments are important. But there are also ideas about other solutions like road improvements. What is your opinion?
Topic 2: Medical service: free or not?

How to write an INTRODUCTION

1.      Identify General topic:– the first sentence : Câu đầu tiên trong phần mở đề nói về chủ đề chung đang được đề cập đến.
Should use long sentence or complex sentence.
Ex:
-          There is no denying that / No one can deny that traffic problems are a constant headache in many countries all over the world these days.

2.      Paraphrase or use synonym to cite the topic: Trích dẫn lại đề bài bằng cách dùng các từ đồng nghĩa hoặc thay đổi cấu trúc câu.
Ex:
-          In other to solve these problems, some people think / believe / maintain that we should have stricter punishments / penalties while others claim other solutions / ways / methods should be considered / take into account.  ---> avoid words repetition.
-          Some people suggest that punishments are necessary; However, a few other methods like road improvement should be considered.
3.      Thesis statement: câu định hướng
Ex:
-          This essay will discuss both views / points of views / attitudes / opinions before I present my view point.
A complete Introduction:
It is a fact that costly medical service is really a burden to many people especially the poor these days. While some people claim that such service should be free / available without charge, others maintain it / this can lead to some negative effects / influences / impacts. This essay will discuss / examine both attitudes before a reasoned conclusion is found.

BODY: analyze
-          Former view
-          Latter view
Former: Some people maintain that heavier / stricter punishments are an effective way to deal with traffic problems. First of all, < collect a large sum of money >
            Stricter punishments are considered as practical solutions by many to make drivers follow the rules. Firstly, the government can get money from those who violating the regulations / breaking the traffic rules and used it in other social activities improving living conditions of people. Moreover, if punished, people will be aware of the precious money they have to submit by working hard.
            In an addition to this, drivers do not dare to violate the regulation...
Latter: However, other people believe / hold a view that other measures / ways / solutions should be taken. Firstly / Initially <improve the road system>. Furthermore, <raise people awareness>.
            However, other people believe that another solution should be taken. Firstly, the government should improve the roads quality. This is because it will be expanded and have more space for vehicles. As a result, the traffic runs more smoothly and no traffic jams anymore. Furthermore, students can study traffic rules at school which helps them aware of how to use the vehicles safely. It seems to be a long term solution, but I strongly believe it can be effective if it can work.
Sample Body:
            Some people hold a view that we should / (it is sensible to ) offer free health care / (medical assistance – service – aid – treatment ) without charge / payment. The main reason is that it can help citizens enjoy better health. This is because if the treatment is expensive, people are not likely to have medical checkups. Therefore, when the diseases is found out, it is usually too late and the cure / ( remedy: phương thuốc, biện pháp cứu chữa) is ineffective. In other words, if all citizens/ people/ civilians ( thường dân ) can get free access to medical services, they have more chances to take care of their health and of course, improve their quality of life.
            However / ( On an opposite angle ), other people are of the opinion that medical service should be charged for the following reasons. First of all, the government will not have enough money to invest in medical fields since / as / because there are other / several no less important fields, such as education and economy which also need investment. Furthermore, it is also claimed that when the service is free, the quality of treatment will go down.

CONCLUSION
Must have one of these expression at the beginning: In conclusion / all things considered / To put it in a nushell.
Ex:
            After all considered, I am in favor of the latter view. The stricter punishments, in my opinion, are insufficient in dealing with / (tackling) traffic problems. Other more practical solutions should be put into operation / carried out.

( To put it in a nutshell, both mentioned points of views have their own pros and con, therefore it is hard to determine which one is more outweighed than the other. As far as I am concerned, this problem needs the combination of all above solutions.)